Note how this statement takes more than a single sentence to make its point.
Both of the thesis statements above are improvements because they do not simply state the obvious: they give a reason why or how we can accept the thesis statement.
In 2015, a paper published in Current Biology by Caleb Brown and Donald Henderson had a similar line hidden among details of a newly discovered horned dinosaur, Times Higher Education pointed out.
“CMB would specifically like to highlight the ongoing and unwavering support of Lorna O’Brien. ” one of the authors wrote in the acknowledgements.
Scholars of writing, however, find that a fully formed articulation of thesis to be one of the final steps in writing.
Professional writers usually weigh their initial claim in light of new evidence and research; student writers should do the same.
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(This version at least says why the difference exists) A young person in the Middle Ages had very different expectations about marriage, family, and personal freedom than do young adults today.
(This version of the statement emphasizes the Medieval, not modern, teenager, but it still does not present an argument to be defended) A young person in the Middle Ages had fewer options for marriage, family, and personal privacy and freedom than do young adults today.